BUBBLES DRIFTING
LIFTING
GIFTING
LIGHT AND COLOR
IRRIDESCENT
BUBBLES BLOWN LIKE
FLOWERS
IN BLOSSOM
FORM AND REFORM
RANDOM BLESSING
BUBBLES, DREAMS AND
SKIES NOW
FILLING
LAUGHING AT MY
FEARS
AND WILLING
ME TO DRIFT IN CADENCE
BUBBLES BECKON
RECKON
QUICKEN
HEARTS TO LIGHTNESS
BRIEFLY
SUMMONED
JUST AS QUICKLY
GONE
FORGOTTEN
BRIEF AS BREATH
AND CHILDHOOD
FANCY
c.2011 Donna Swanson
lovely bubble poem, delightful read.
Nice word choices!
Everything you do is done to perfection. xoXox
Excellent!
Lovely rhythm/cadence in your piece … I would imagine that the words have a sort of “breathless” quality when read aloud !
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This is such a delightful bubble poem and so relaxing to read thank you so much
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/29/bubbling-potion-of-love/
Simply awesome, Donna. Another work of art from your keyboard. Love it!
so wonderful! Love the thought of bubbles as random blessings — multiple! 🙂
random blessings are beautiful and worthy our attentions.
cheers.
love your take.
🙂
Very nice, I liked it a lot!
Spot on and very good. A temperal existance with last impression. A good message very well presented and written.
Wonderful to read, I love it 🙂
Excellent!
wonderful! I love the staccato-beat of the single word lines, it read quickly, a bit like bubbles popping! well done 🙂